Author Carla Swafford Newsletter: Interview & Sale

Over the years, I’ve been told readers love to revisit characters. They can show up in a new book or even a blog interview. So I thought you might be interested in hearing from Jake and Angel of JAKE, A Southern Crime Family Novel. (The book JAKE is not a cliff hanger for the couple, but the other brothers have a piece of the mystery to solve.) Their story isn’t finished, because Sen’s and Ethan’s stories are yet to be published, hopefully next year, but let’s pretend they were interviewed by a local news reporter the day after their ‘forced’ marriage. (The marriage happened about half-way or so through the book.)

Reporter: Congratulations, Mr. and Mrs. Whitfield. Being from rival families, the excitement of you two getting married has the small town of Marystown in an uproar. Was that why someone fired on you during the wedding, Mr. Whitfield? As you were also shot at on while your father was being buried? Does someone not want to your families to be united?

Jake: Call me Jake. Look at my bride. Her ebony hair with red tips and all that goth gear she wears, you know she’s into kinky shit. Yep. She’s different. I like it. Besides with that plump ass in black leather, she’s made for spanking, who wouldn’t be jealous of me?

Reporter: I think you may be in trouble. Your wife is glaring at you.

Jake: [smiling big] She can glare all she wants. She knows who’s boss in the bedroom.

Reporter: [cough] Mrs. Whitfield, rumor is, you two had to get married because of your relatives’ wills.

Angel: [still glaring at Jake] As you know, such a stipulation is not valid. Please call me Angel.

Reporter: Yet, here you are married. Mr…uh…Jake, what are the police doing about the shooter or shooters?

Jake: [he narrows his eyes and looks away] Sand County Sheriff Department is looking into it. But I don’t hold out much hope. They haven’t arrested the person who killed my father and her grandfather. So I don’t expect an arrest for the other shootings.

Reporter: Yeah. right. [cough] Angel, I heard you’ve taken over your grandfather’s businesses. Are you and Jake and his brothers going to combine the…the…organizations?

Angel: No. My grandfather’s businesses will be transferred to my brother when he comes of age. I’m his guardian.

Jake: [Smirks] Now, sugar, you know your grandfather’s will made me his guardian.

Angel: [Glares again at Jake] We’ll talk about that later.

Jake: Sure. In the bedroom, while you’re on your knees.

Angel: Yeah, you and whose army?

Jake: You know you like it. Plus I could always ask Sen to help. He loves to share and watch. Or Ethan, tying up women is his thing.

Angel: Over my dead body…no, correct that. Your dead body. [Pulls out a knife from her boots and starts to clean her nails with the sharp tip.]

Reporter: [Looking nervously back and forth between the two] Okay. I guess I better end it here, folks. [The reporter turns off his recorder and runs for the door.]


A heads up, the second book in the Small-Town duo will be on sale September 23 to 25, 2023. Be sure to get your copy.

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Thanks.

Carla

Author Carla Swafford Newsletter: Sale

Sale starts September 1, 2023.

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SEPT 16: I will provide Save The Story presentation to the Georgia Romance Writers on September 16, 2023, 9 a.m. USA-Central/10 a.m. USA-Eastern, Saturday. You could attend at GRW’s meeting location or on-line as the presentation will be virtual.

About the Presentation:

It’s a simple process for authors to learn how to break down their story with “beats.” In turn, they’ll find the right starting point in their book, prevent sagging middles, and dragging story lines. Program based on Blake Snyder’s Save the Cat! I use humor, clips from the movie, and information through an on-line screen to help the author understand how it’s done.

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Author Carla Swafford Newsletter: Excerpts

Well, most kids are back at school here in the States. But that doesn’t mean us adults can’t take a stay vacay and enjoy a pool or a lake or the mountains. So be sure to pick up Loving The Small-Town Hero or Loving The Small-Town Preacher’s Son in ebook or paperback. Remember they have different covers (ebook vs paperback). They are spicy and for ADULT only.

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I’ve included in this newsletter excerpts of the two books. A side note about the complete books: If you plan to read both books, I suggest reading Preacher’s Son first and then Hero. They are standalones, but there are some of Hero’s backstory in Preacher’s Son.

Loving The Small-Town Preacher’s Son two chapters:

Chapter Seven

Mary sighed. The clock on her nightstand read eleven-eleven and she still couldn’t sleep. Earlier, when she crawled into bed, she’d wanted to think of anything but Las Vegas and the phone call that morning. Dreaming of Luke had been the best foil. Lean back muscles and long runner’s legs. She wanted to pull the white T-shirt off dream-Luke and lick every dip between each muscle, to taste his straight serious lips as she encouraged the corners to lift in a smile. She wanted to see that dimple again.

The clank of the backyard gate brought her out of bed, scrambling for her robe.

Please. Please. Please. Don’t let it be anything but the wind.

Her heart began to pound faster with each hurried step down the stairway. Surely, it would be days before men from Las Vegas showed up. Every nerve itched like ants beneath her skin. The old sick feeling from eighteen months ago returned in full force.

An outside brightness glimmered through the curtains. Good. Her motion lights worked. She checked the wall near the garage door. Someone had turned off the security alarm. Or wait…had she remembered to turn it on?How could she make a mistake like that? She couldn’t remember. Likely, she’d gotten lax.

Call 911.

Then tell them what? That she received a scary misdialed call from Las Vegas and her motion lights work? Even if Jorge Lazaro, Vincent’s old boss, had sent someone, they’d already be inside, convincing her in ways she’d rather not imagine to hand over the information.

So calling the police was out.

She still needed to protect herself as she checked it out. Probably a wild animal caused the light to come on. She glanced up the stairs toward her and her mother’s bedrooms and shook her head. No time to waste. Only thing to do was to grab the metal baseball bat from behind the kitchen door and go into the backyard and see what opened the gate.

Yeah, sure.

Many horror movies started with the same premise. Stupid girl hears noise outside and goes to investigate. The only difference was she carried a baseball bat and knew how to use it. Vincent had taught her several tricks of his trade.

Who else would go? Her mom? Sending out a sixty-year-old woman made little sense when her daughter was quite capable. In times like these, she really missed having a man around. The image of dark-blue eyes filled with sadness contrasting with a sinful grin and dimple brought her to a halt.

Thinking about Luke would be better saved for another time. She needed to keep her attention on the danger and any thought of asking her neighbor for help had to be forgotten. Probably the wind pushed the gate open.

Leaving the light off in the kitchen, she eased opened the back door and stepped onto the patio with the bat raised high. One step to the side brought her into the shadows. Crickets and tree frogs chirped. Nothing moved. Even the breeze had stopped.

Then she saw him. He charged toward her from the pasture fence. She screamed and swung at the dark form.

“Mary,” a deep male voice shouted behind her.

At the same time, arms came around her and jerked the baseball bat out of her hands. Then her mother stepped into the light. Oh, my God. She’d almost knocked her mother senseless. On that thought, she spun around, stepping between her mom and whoever had taken the bat.

“Luke?”

He stood a couple of feet away, holding the bat by the wrong end.

“What are you doing out here with my mom?” she asked. He looked dangerous, glaring at her from beneath the lights.

“Lacy wouldn’t come when I called and I thought I heard her meowing at the house across the pasture,” her mom said before he could answer. “I hurried back home to see if she’d returned.” She shivered in the night air, wearing only her cotton pajamas.

Heart in her throat, Mary shook her head. “Mom, Lacy died last year. Remember?”

Her mom wrinkled her forehead and looked around.

Seeing her confusion, Mary knew her mom had experienced another episode. She exhaled and shut her eyes for a second. After taking a few deep breaths, she regained her composure and looked at Luke. He appeared to be studying the older woman closely as most people did after she had done something odd.

Mary turned to grasp her mom’s shoulders with a light touch, drawing her attention. “Please go into the bathroom and wash off your feet. I’ll be with you in a minute to check on you. Okay?”

It hurt to see the confused look in those eyes she knew so well. Would she ever get used to seeing her mom like this? A woman who’d survived a first husband dying of cancer in his twenties, and stood up against a second husband’s abuse. Later, she’d tracked down her teenage daughter to Las Vegas and apologized for not believing her. The same woman who’d cleaned restrooms and mopped floors so her daughter could have decent clothes and a place to stay.

As the screen door clacked behind the older woman, Mary held her hand out to Luke.

Chapter Eight

Luke glanced at her hand and then at the bat, handing it to her small end first. Once Mary clasped it, he thought she looked weary and unsure of what to do with it.

The shadows half hid her face. Her sadness made him wish he could pull her into his arms, to comfort her.

“Alzheimer’s or dementia?” When he was younger, he helped his dad during his church visitations with the sick and elderly, so he understood the signs and the difference.

“Alzheimer’s. Thank you.” She cleared her throat and lowered the bat to her side. The pain in her eyes clearly warned she’d rather talk about anything else. “You kept me from hurting my mom. She’s never left the house at night before.” Her bathrobe had fallen open, revealing a short cotton gown with small, hot pink flowers that reached just above her knees. Not the sexy negligee he’d always imagined she wore to bed.

The girly gown made her more real. Touchable. His cock took notice too and began to swell in appreciation.

“What are you doing out so late? In my yard?” Her questions brought him to his senses. He pulled his gaze up to her heavy-lidded eyes.

She glanced away and tugged her robe closed.

Did she think he was a pervert hanging around her house, peeking into the windows? Of course. Why should she be any different? Though it went against the grain to explain, he wanted her to think better of him than the rest of Sand City.

“When I can’t sleep, I sit on the fence behind the house and stare at the stars.” He refused to admit to staring at her house and wondering about her bedroom.

They were alone. For the first time since they’d met, no one to watch their every move.

She appeared relaxed compared to yesterday. He stepped closer. A barely there grin softened her face. The light fragrance of honeysuckle mixed with a fresh breeze engulfed his senses as she drew nearer. He touched her arm. The robe prevented him from feeling her silky skin. He lifted his other hand and touched her cheek. Yeah. Silky, and oh so soft.

He shifted from one foot to the other, bringing her within reach. Their bodies brushed against each other. She whimpered, in need, not in protest or disgust. A tilt of his head brought his lips down within a breath of hers. Her body swayed into his. He kissed her, his touch light to assure her all was okay.

She tasted of mint toothpaste and heaven and he wanted more.

He pressed his mouth harder to hers, and her lips parted. Heat tightened his skin and filled his cock as his tongue slid along hers. Desire to taste more of her increased with each thrust of her tongue meeting his.

A vibrating clank exploded behind Luke. They jumped apart. The metal bat rolled off the patio.

“Oh. I forgot I was holding it.” Her breathless voice brought a grin to his face.

His kiss had made her forget herself. He liked that. A sophisticated woman like her lost in a kiss with him. Go figure.

He wanted to kiss her again. Maybe another time.

“You better go inside and check on your ma,” he said gruffly, fisting his hands to resist grabbing her again.

She licked her upper lip. Was she tasting his kiss? Just the thought made him harder.

“You need something better than a bat to protect you,” he said as she stooped to pick it up.

Dark round eyes peered up at him. “What? A gun?”

“Yeah.” He held out his hand, but she stood without his help.

 “Instead of someone taking a bat out of my hands, it would be a gun? Or I could possibly shoot my mom instead of knocking her on the side of the head.” She looked at him as if he’d lost his mind for sure.

“I believe you have enough sense to double-check before shooting.”

“Maybe so. Doesn’t matter. I’ll use whatever I feel comfortable with.”

“So you played baseball?” He couldn’t resist teasing her. Any chance of being alone with her again, teaching her to shoot a gun, tempted him at every turn.

“Softball. You don’t have to have a license for that.” Her half grin almost pushed him to take a kiss from her once more.

“I’ll bring one of mine over for you tomorrow and show you how to shoot it.” He knew of a secluded area in the large pasture near a creek perfect for shooting practice.

“You have guns?” She hugged the bat to her chest.

He’d never been so jealous of an inanimate object in his life.

“I live in the South, don’t I?” His drawl stretched the last two words.

“But I thought . . .” She obviously didn’t want to finish the sentence. Her deep breath parted the robe enough for him to see the four small buttons down the front. He hadn’t noticed them earlier, only one was undone.

“Humph.” For some reason, he wanted to be the one to show her how to shoot, and the hell with the consequences. “You want to know, why do I have guns while on parole? Let’s say they don’t always check, and they’re in my dad’s name. And like I said, I live in the South.”

“Thanks. I’m not sure I’ll feel any safer, but, okay, I’ll take you up on your offer.” On hearing the doubt in her voice, he felt guilty about taking advantage of her fear as an excuse to be around her.

When she turned to go back to the house, he asked, “Why do you feel you need protection? As long as you stay away from the mill on the other end of town, you don’t have to worry. People still leave their doors unlocked around here at night and when they go to the store.”

A flicker of fear shone in those beautiful eyes as she looked at him.

“Why? Don’t you know? It’s the South and every God-fearing woman needs to become a proficient shooter. You know to keep varmints out of the backyard,” she said in an overdone southern accent.

“Varmints? Right.” He stood next to the back door. “I’ll wait until you’re inside before leaving.”

Chuckling, he waited until she closed the door, and he heard a bolt click before heading back to his house. Though she pretended to joke, he’d heard the seriousness in her tone about needing protection. She must know she had nothing to fear from him. Someone had placed a deep-seated fear in her eyes, and he wanted to find out why and then he could take care of whoever it was scaring her.

At least her lie had eased his hard-on.

Loving The Small-Town Hero two chapters:

Chapter Four

Maybe J.T. had it right.

Molly shifted in the driver’s seat and glanced into the back. Maybe she was stupid when it came to her brother. Her dad had made her promise to keep an eye on Devlin now that he was out of jail on bond. Lord knows, her brother didn’t have the sense of a billy goat. The boy would drink mouthwash to get drunk if she didn’t watch him. No one had to worry he would jump bail. He was too falling-down drunk most of the time. For the last week, he’d done nothing but drink booze and howl at the moon.

When she heard snoring coming from the studio sleeper, she relaxed. Finally, he was asleep. As soon as the sigh escaped her lips, someone knocked on the door and she scrambled to stop the offender.

She stepped out on the metal step into the late-afternoon sunshine. Her heart stopped. Sheriff J.T. Rogan stood in the alley behind Bill’s Diner looking up at her with his white cowboy hat shading his eyes. She shook her head in an attempt to clear her lust-filled thoughts. No man should look so good in a uniform.

“Is Devlin in there?” he asked.

“Yeah, he’s sleeping. He somehow found a bottle of Jim Beam and downed it before lunch.” She remained on the top step, hoping her brother hadn’t stolen the whiskey.

“I’ll need to see for myself. He didn’t check in today.” J.T. placed a foot on the bottom step.

“What if I say no?” Some deep urge to irritate the sheriff kept bubbling to the top whenever he was around. Surely she’d gotten over her resentment of how boys treated her growing up, even the one in front of her, though he was no longer a boy. Pure hard-core man.

“Then I’ll have to take you in for obstructing justice, and aiding and abetting.” He wrapped his hand around the grab handle and took the top step, crowding her. Heat radiated wherever his body touched hers. She looked up and could finally see his eyes. The anger shooting out of their depths chilled her to the bone. “If you’re covering for your brother—”

“Yes.” The next second, she amended, “No! I mean, you can come in. He’s asleep and I didn’t want you to wake him. Please just peek inside but don’t wake him.” She moved out of the way and jumped to the ground.

The sheriff ducked inside after taking off his hat and kneeled on the driver-side seat, leaving the door open, and then leaned over to look into the back. He stared for a few moments and turned his head, checking the rest of the studio sleeper before stepping out, closing the door softly behind him.

“Okay. Be sure to tell your brother not to miss another check in. He needs to lay off alcohol.” J.T. put his hat back on and headed toward his marked SUV. “And tell him he needs to stay at his dad’s place. He’s too close to the Sandbox and some of the regulars would like nothing better than to catch him in an alley.”

If Molly didn’t know better, she swore he acted as if he couldn’t get away from her fast enough. Was he afraid she’d attack him?

She sat down on the bottom step, and once again watched as he drove away. Why was she constantly seeing the tail end of his SUV? What was it about the man that made her heart flutter after twelve years?

Make that seventeen years. She’d been eleven when he spoke to her for the first time. He’d been her white knight, taking up for the gangly girl being made fun of by a bunch of kids at the park.

Four years older, he looked like an action hero with long, black hair, sunglasses, and no helmet as he rode a dirt bike between the picnic tables.

She was one of those girls who started filling out early and her mom had recently bought her a bra. The boys teased her about the undergarment outline beneath her T-shirt and kept snapping her back strap. Almost in tears, she’d blindly swung at the troublemakers. At the same moment, J.T. sprayed gravel on the boys, and then jumped off the bike, hollering threats as they ran away.

When he took off his sunglasses, hooking them in the neckline of his T-shirt, he sauntered over to her. She still remembered what he’d said.

“You okay, kid?”

She nodded.

He touched her cheek. “Don’t cry. Those bastards will regret the day they hassled you.” His grin faded when her tears continued. “Wait and see, you’ll grow into those long legs and they’ll come sniffing. Be sure to make them beg to touch your feet.”

She hadn’t understood what he meant, but she liked his sweet tone. No one talked so sweet to her.

He’d used the corner of his T-shirt to clean the wet streaks off her face. She’d giggled as he chucked her chin before cranking up his dirt bike.

“Thank you,” she shouted over the whining bike noise, her voice cracking.

“It was nothing.” Then a plume of smoke was all she could see of him. Like magic, he was gone and she knew her life wouldn’t be the same.

It hadn’t been nothing to her. Her crush had grown and grown as she matured and filled out. The problem was, the only guy she wanted to kiss her feet, or any part of her body for that matter, wouldn’t give her the time of day.

Chapter Five

J.T. shifted in his seat. Eddie had been right. From what he’d seen three days earlier, the huge RV-like sleeper could easily hold four. Hell, she could hold an orgy in that monster. Not only bunk beds—double-sized on bottom and twin-sized on top—it had a small sink, mini fridge, and stove with a flat-screen TV in one corner above a short counter and what looked like a shower near the back. J.T. shifted again as he watched the semi parked behind Bill’s Diner. He wished Molly had followed his instructions and sent her brother home. This morning, his office had received a call about a disturbance behind the diner. Most likely one of Sand City’s citizens had decided to take justice in their own hands and punished Devlin.

On driving up, he didn’t see anything to be concerned about. So he sat and waited. The sun high overhead had him rolling down the driver-side window. As the minutes passed, nothing but his imagination occupied his time, conjuring up who Molly invited into her spacious sleeper and what they did. With her pretty girl-next-door looks and long legs, he imagined she rarely got lonely. He bet when she unbraided her hair, the mass of golden brown reached beyond the small of her back.

Well, he better check on her. Just to make sure she was okay. He unbuckled his seat belt and grabbed his hat. When he looked at her truck one more time, he shook his head. Who was he kidding? He wanted an excuse to see her again.

He opened his SUV’s door at the same time a scream exploded from inside her truck. Pulling his gun from its holster as he tossed his hat on the front seat, he ran and jerked open the cab door. He slipped between the steering wheel and driver’s seat, aiming his gun at the culprit.

Wide chocolate-brown eyes stared at him from a pale face. She stood near the bunks in a black bra and thong. Yep, her hair reached the small of her back. Every drop of saliva left his mouth.

“What are you doing here?” she asked.

Was she pulling one of her stunts on him again? He swallowed. “I heard a scream…”

As she opened her mouth to explain, a gray mouse darted from under the bunks and ran toward the cab. Molly screamed again.

“You’re afraid of a tiny mouse?” J.T. locked the safety on his gun and holstered it as he began laughing.

“I hate the filthy creatures.”

She shivered and then looked down at herself. Her face reddened as she turned her back to him. He liked that view too.

“Oh, crap!”  With a quick jerk she pulled a blanket off the bunk and then wrapped it around her shoulders. “Quit staring! Get out!” Facing him again, she pointed toward the door.

“I just can’t believe Ms. Molly Hicks, who shoots sheriffs without flinching, is frightened of a small rodent.” He crossed his arms, smiling. The blanket teased him to examine again. One long thigh peeked between the cloth, daring him to touch and see if her skin felt as soft as it looked.

As she opened her mouth to make one of her usual smart-aleck comments, the mouse ran across the floor and over her foot. She screamed once again and jumped into his arms, dropping the blanket.

He held her tightly as her arms clasped his neck for dear life. Unable to control himself, he laughed so hard tears came into his eyes.

She began beating his chest. “How dare you laugh at me? It’s not funny! They carry diseases.” Her face turned a brighter shade of red but J.T. wasn’t sure if it was from anger or embarrassment.

“I’m sorry, but you have to admit this is so unlike you. I never thought…” He chuckled as he sat on the edge of the bottom bed and gazed at her. She felt good in his lap. With one hand he caught both of hers. They continued to stare at each other, nearly nose-to-nose. He recognized what was happening between them and she probably did too.

The satiny skin beneath his hands registered. Nothing felt better than a curvy, velvety soft woman in his arms. With each wiggle of her behind, his body demonstrated how much he appreciated her movements.

“Be still,” he whispered with a groan.

“No,” she whispered. Her eyelids dipped and then she kissed him.

She tasted of peppermint, so sweet he wanted more. He released her hands. She wrapped her arms around his neck. Grabbing a handful of her silky hair, he kissed back, his tongue exploring and wanting more. The woman knew how to kiss.

In an effort to regain his breath, he dropped his mouth to kiss the tender spot behind her ear before returning to her mouth. He nipped at her full lower lip and sucked the tender flesh into his mouth.

His hand covered one plump breast, and he liked how there was more to spare. With a jerk of the lace, he exposed one breast, giving his mouth access to a brown nipple. He tongued and drew on the hard nub as she moaned. Lowering the other side of her bra, he took a second to admire the sight of her hard nipples, perfect and more than handfuls. Leaning down he sucked hard on the newly exposed breast as he pinched her wet nipple and she arched into his mouth. Yeah, he liked her in his arms.

When he felt her hands fumble with the buckle of his duty belt, he inhaled, steeling himself for what was about to come. He pressed a kiss to each breast and released his grip of her hair, feeling ashamed of his earlier roughness, then grasped her hands before she could unhook and unzip his pants.

“Molly,” he demanded. She struggled against his hold, pulling her hands away and resumed her task. “Stop! We can’t do this,” he said a little sharper than he intended. He grabbed her wrists.

She shuddered and looked up with haunted eyes. What was wrong with her? Her actions were of a desperate woman. She was pretty enough to catch any person’s attention, and with her luscious body she could easily keep their interest. Did she act like this with everyone she wanted?

“Why not? We’re single and over twenty-one.” Tears began to well up in her eyes.

Damn. The last thing he needed was her crying again. And to have stoic Molly emotional was more than he could handle. He was never good at comforting women. He preferred her mad.

“First, I’m on duty and, second, I’m not going down that road with you again.” He gently placed her on the bunk and stood, tucking his shirt back into his pants, and then buckled his belt. Swiping nonexistent dust from his pants, trying to give her some time to straighten her bra and cover herself with the blanket, he did his best not to look. Again. Plus he needed time to get his body under control, some of the hardness to diminish.

When he felt it was safe, he glanced at her. Her face was pale but no tears marred her cheeks. Instead of a blanket, she’d pulled on a robe and was covered from neck to pink toenails in the material he knew was called chenille.

Forcing his eyes from the lovely sight, he stepped out of the studio into the cab and reached for the door handle.

“By the way, where’s your brother? The locator said he was in your truck.” He was late checking in per his schedule.

“He’s at the diner, waiting for me to meet him. He’s allowed to go there by himself. You might check the GPS location again. It’s probably showing he’s ten feet from my truck. I am parked behind the building.”

He needed to kiss that smirk off her face. Damn it. He gritted his teeth and nodded.

Yeah, her brother could go to prearranged appointments and even to the grocery store and diner, but he’d rather Devlin was out of downtown. It would be safer for all concerned until the trial.

After glancing around for the last time, he said, “I suggest you get someone to trap the mouse. It wouldn’t help your brother any if you got arrested for disturbing the peace, especially if you climb over your next rescuer wearing only bra and panties.”

She squealed, this time not from fright but anger.

Just as he started to close the door a red stiletto shoe flew by his head and landed on the pavement. He laughed. No sooner than he slammed the door closed, he saw the shoe’s mate hit the window.


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First free item. I decided as a thank you to those who follow my website/blog or signed up for my newsletter (they are the same now), I will provide you with a free copy of ebook Kidnapped For A Day (The Circle Organization short story). Just email me at authorcarlaswafford @gmail.com and ask for a copy. Then in 48 hrs you should receive a “redemption link” from Amazon (for US recipients). If you live outside the US, let me know in your email, and I’ll arrange another way to send you a copy.

A side note: The short story was published in a book called What A Day! with other authors. So I had to write a tame story. It’s rated PG-13 instead of my usual X.

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“Really, how many women could resist snuggling up to a broad-shouldered, long-legged man with such inscrutable gray eyes?”

Kidnapped For A Day: Short Story
Carla Swafford

Second free item. In August, I will provide a free presentation called Save The Story (No Sagging Middles). If you’re a thinking about becoming a writer, or you’re a beginner or been doing it for years and want to improve your plotting or pump up the middle (or use guides to help your pantser story), then this will be perfect for you. It’s based on Blake Snyder’s Save The Cat. His original book was for screenwriting, but it applies for novels too. You can find it, plus many others geared toward novel writing, on Amazon.

If you’re wondering, I’ve provided this program to two Romance Writers of America chapters (numerous times), two public libraries, a large conference, and soon in September to the Georgia Romance Writers organization. The presentation is geared toward romance, but you can use it for any genre (thriller, sci-fi, YA, etc.).

The program will be on Zoom. If you plan to attend, be sure to do two things: (1) fill out the form here and I’ll confirm I received it, Then I’ll email you before the date with instructions on how to join the Zoom presentation. (2) In the meanwhile, sign up for a Zoom account (free) at Zoom.us and be prepared by watching the movie Pretty Woman, if you haven’t before .

When: August 26, 2023; Saturday, 12 noon on Zoom. Where: Coming to your desktop, laptop, or phone via Zoom. How long: 45 minutes plus 15 minutes of question/answer time at the end. This is open to anyone, but I do have a cap. So sign up soon.


Just a heads up. My latest books have two covers. One for ebook (Amazon’s Kindle Unlimited only), and one for paperbacks (everywhere). I’m planning to provide them in hardback too.

That’s it for now. I’ll probably have more news soon. I hope to hear from you soon.

Regards.

Carla Swafford

P.S. Remember, you can find me on the following social sites.

Rare Book Review: Forever Your Rogue by Erin Langston

It’s been a long time since my last book review (on my blog or elsewhere). True, I do few anyway, and even less the last couple years. Even though I enjoy certain books throughout the year, only one or two, if I’m lucky, are worth, to me, a review. See, any typing I do, I want the time and energy to go to writing books. HA!

I had the pleasure of reading Forever Your Rogue by Erin Langston. If you want to know what it’s about check out her blurb.

One of my go-to historical period romances is a regency. This is one of the best. No stupid misunderstandings. No too stupid to live moments, but some of the most emotional scenes.

I don’t know if I’m going through something I’m unaware of or if the story was so moving it made me cry in a couple spots. I teared up in one place that was heart-wrenching (mother worried about the custody of her children) and the others were from the hero’s realization and change.

If you’re wondering, the book has spice (what I consider light) but not explicit.

The whole book was beautiful and well-worth reading. It might even be a book I’ll read again.

Another New Release soon!

A crazy old song echoes in her head. Why? Well, she shot the sheriff, but her brother didn’t shoot the deputy. Or something like that. So let’s find out what really happened…

Years before, Molly Hicks escaped her hometown of Sand City, Alabama, but her plans of never returning are ignored when her parents demand she help control her troublemaking younger brother. No sooner than she arrives, he’s thrown in jail accused of killing a deputy. Then she shoots the sheriff. Just a graze, but she lands in a cell alongside her sibling.

Sheriff J.T. Rogan refuses to admit he has a soft spot for any Hicks, especially Molly. The same girl whose father kicked him out of town as a teenager. So when he releases her without filing charges, it’s no surprise she stalks him around town, insisting he find the real killer.

When another body turns up, while her brother is locked up, J.T. is beginning to believe Molly. As they track down clues and come up with suspects, he remembers why he always wanted to be her hero.

Sign Up For Workshop – Event In June

  • Date: June 3, 2023, Saturday
  • Time: Noon to 4 p.m.
  • Location: North Shelby Library, upstairs meeting room
  • 5521 Cahaba Valley Road, Birmingham, AL 35242. 205-439-5500
  • Presented by Southern Magic Romance Writers of America.
  • Open to all published or unpublished writers of any genre

      Four 45-minute Sessions

So You Think You Want to Write

By Louisa Cornell

Choosing a Publishing Path

By Carla Swafford

(www.carlaswafford.com)

Preparing Your Writing for Submission/Publication

By Betty Bolté

(www.bettybolte.com)

Marketing and Social Media/Other Resources

By Jo Chambliss

(www.jochambliss.com)

Go here to register and get more info: https://wordpress.com/page/southernmagic.org/286

New Release: Loving The Small-Town Preacher’s Son

Former Vegas showgirl Mary Hightower swore off dangerous men after the death of her mafia husband. To protect her and her mom, they move to a small southern town far from her past life to start a new bad-boy-free existence. Then she meets Luke.

Ex-convict Luke Blackwood works hard to be the man his mom could have been proud of, yet his bruised knuckles prove he’s a failure. Though his dad still believes in him, it may take the love of a long-legged, soft-spoken woman to repair what is broken inside.

When her husband’s former boss demands the evidence she has hidden, she turns to the only man she can trust. But is the reformed bad boy willing to do whatever’s needed to save the woman he wants for his own?

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Will be available on Kindle Unlimited (ebook)

Paperback everywhere else

Outspoken Women: The Good, The Bad, & The Misunderstood

For the last couple years I’ve been thinking about this. Be aware this is NOT a political post, but a deep concern for women’s rights built from reading articles and watching a variety of news broadcasts.

Most people who know or follow me, are aware of how I feel about people calling women KAREN, if that’s not their name. It’s used as a derogative label. I know so many women named Karen, and each and every one I know are nice and considerate to the people around them. They do not deserve having their name misused. People, women especially, really need to quit using the name in that way. Call the ones misbehaving: bitches, assholes, and numerous other expletives–use your imagination–but not the name.

I had to state that first. So enough about that. Let’s now talk about those women.

Sure, the majority of them were misbehaving and treating others in an unacceptable way. They were rude, nosey, loud, short-tempered, and often racist and narrow-minded. That is certainly behavior that needs to be stopped and/or changed.

But let’s examine why they were acting that way?

Beyond mental illness or abuse or stress that affects their behavior, women are told and taught to correct any misconduct around them. What? Yeah. Think about it.

For centuries, women were subservient to men (in many areas of the world, they still are). Yet, now in the U.S.A., women are able to vote, work outside the home (not necessarily in a family business) even in many male dominant roles, run for any government position, obtain loans, possess credit cards, buy homes and cars without a male’s signature, etc. Most of these in just the last fifty years. All of this is great, yet women have also been told for centuries (a well-known proverb from Africa) that the world is a village and we must look after not only our own children, but look after other people’s children. It can mean babysit kids, but so much more like to keep them safe and teach those younger what is needed to live in our every day society (village/town/city).

All those years ago, the general population of women were expected to sit back with their mouths closed and let the men handle the problems of society. Of course, people will point out the women’s suffrage and temperance movements. To be fair, you have to remember men often were involved or actually started the crusades. Such good husbands, brothers, and sons, right? We have to give them some of the credit, for if not, the possibility of women voting nationwide (19th amendment ratified in 1920) would’ve taken much longer than it did. You have to remember, there were zero women in Congress.

What I’m getting to is that we have to be careful about shutting up women when they are expressing an injustice. Those in particular who are using logical, even tones (even shout when necessary) in declaring what is wrong. Certainly there are people (men and women) who need to be more thoughtful, less ignorant, and avoid jumping to conclusions.

I do know I never want to go back to the “good ole days” of being seen and not heard. If we allow people to shut down every woman who complains, especially when they stand up for themselves and their families, we gamble on that action splattering over ALL WOMEN and to every aspect of their lives. Before we know it, we will slide back to the 1970s or earlier.

Goodness, I had enough of serving coffee at meetings. I don’t even drink the stuff.

What Is Your Book About?

Recently, I read a book’s blurb that all it told was she’d returned to her hometown, she’d changed (I suspected she was outgoing when she was young and now wasn’t – that was an assumption from the vague blurb), and the handsome guy had noticed her. That’s it.

What did the guy do for a living that might be important to the story? Were they high school friends, lovers, or enemies? Besides being good looking, is there something more about him to draw the reader’s interest? Habits, hobbies? The author didn’t have to add all of that, but some little something more that tells us about the male lead besides how he looked.

Nothing was said that would draw me in to read it, unless returning to a hometown is one of my favorite tropes. It’s not really. So it didn’t. Have you noticed more and more books lately have blurbs like this. A bunch of nothing about the plot. Just emotions that aren’t really deep.

When you write your blurb, ask another author who you trust to read it. Remember each main character (MC) needs a trope. In other words, you need at least a hook per main character that will interest the reader. Your blurb (each MC) should have a GMC (Goal, Motivation, Conflict). That doesn’t mean to give the ending away. Each MC will have a Goal in the beginning that will most likely change before the ending. That’s often how the characters show growth.

Of course, the MCs need emotional goals too. So let me break it down for you. Just remember, you’re not telling the whole story, but having the GMC spelled out helps you write the blurb with a mixture of the plot and emotion.

Goal: MC wants?

Motivation: Because?

Conflict: But?

Here’s my book Jake’s GMC.

  • Angel’s Goal: She wants out of the criminal world and to discover the person/people who murdered her grandfather.
  • Jake’s Goal: He wants to leave the life his father forced on him, yet determined to do away with the person/people who killed his father and stop the organization trying to overtake his county.
  • Angel’s Motivation: Because she knows it’s the only way to protect her younger brother.
  • Jake’s Motivation: Because if he and his brothers continue in their father’s footsteps, they would be dead too.
  • Angel’s Conflict: But her grandfather wrote a codicil requiring her to marry a despised Whitfield, though she doesn’t really hate Jake. She’s been in love with him since a sexy incidence in high school.
  • Jake’s Conflict: But his father wrote a codicil requiring him to marry a crazy Tally, though he cannot forget how attracted to her he’d been since that one scene in high school.

Funny, how these two people have so much in common and family history has kept them apart. They are destined to be together, right?

Here’s the blurb.

Forget the Hatfields and McCoys, in a small Southern town, the Whitfields and Tallys are the real family feud. So for some unholy reason, Jake Whitfield’s old man and Angel Tally’s grandfather wrote codicils to their wills the night before they died in a suspicious fire. The codicils require Jake and Angel to marry or lose their inheritances.

Jake feels like a man with two faces. One he presents to his brothers and the public: the criminal willing to step on anyone for a buck while mercilessly protecting the business. The other: the lonely man wanting a better life for himself and his family and working with an FBI agent to make it happen.

To Jake, marrying Angel makes sense. With her family’s help, he can fight the new criminal organization that’s moving into his town. Immersed in the criminal world, there is no hope for Angel, but her brother is still young. She will do anything to protect him from that way of life and whoever killed their grandfather, even marry a despised Whitfield. And Angel never forgot about the sexy incident with Jake in high school ten years earlier. And if she has to go along with a Whitfield-Tally marriage, she wants a replay.

As you see, you basically take the WANT-BECAUSE-BUT and then you smooth out the information into two or three paragraphs.

The Tropes above are Forced Marriage that turned into Marriage of Convenience, Criminal Hero (in this book Heroine is too), Enemies to Lovers/Forbidden Love, First Love (her), Partners in Crime, and Revenge. Whoa! This was packed with tropes.

Remember, vague will not sell books.

A Question About What is a Bestseller (TikTok)

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When can an author call themselves bestseller? Does it matter to you? A copy of the list is on my website. See my profile #bestseller #booktok #applebooks

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