Newsletter: Author Carla Swafford – ARCS & Happy Irish Day

Am I Irish? Well, per 23 & Me, I am. The report didn’t show the exact percentage as it was mixed in as British & Irish (83%) along with many other smaller percentages. And Ancestry DNA doesn’t actually say it, but in the small print it shows Northern Ireland to be included under Scotland (38%). Of course, Britain includes Scotland. Yes, I’m aware the Irish immigrated to Scotland and vice versa. But when I was growing up, I heard Dutch, German, and Welsh, not a word about Irish or Scottish. Goodness, I had no idea I was a Scot until just a few years ago when a cousin of mine gave me a copy of the family tree school report (1960s) he’d done after talking with my maternal grandfather. Live and learn, right?

Writing Tip

Probably like you, I read a lot of books. Nowadays, I stick to romances because my spare time is limited, but many years ago, I read historical non-fiction and celebrity biographies and autobiographies. Back to fiction. One of the things I’ve been noticing in current books is dialogue being broken up by one speaker. Let me give you an example.

This is the accepted way.

“Damn. You better be glad I didn’t know you had this on.” he leaned over and ran his tongue along the string of pearls. “We would’ve never made it to the wedding.” The heel of his palm rotated, and she bowed her back. “Hold onto the headboard.”

She stretched and grasped beneath the edge above her head. As she suspected, her breasts lifted out of the corset.

JAKE, A SOUTHERN CRIME FAMILY NOVEL.


The following is the confusing way.

“Damn. You better be glad I didn’t know you had this on.” he leaned over and ran his tongue along the string of pearls.

“We would’ve never made it to the wedding.” The heel of his palm rotated, and she bowed her back.

“Hold onto the headboard.”

She stretched and grasped beneath the edge above her head. As she suspected, her breasts lifted out of the corset.

JAKE, A SOUTHERN CRIME FAMILY NOVEL


I would read this as the first sentence is Jake. Second sentence is Angel. Third is Jake. Because dialogue is only broken to another paragraph when it’s another person speaking. Side note: If they talk at the same time, it’s still in separate paragraphs, but the narration mentions it’s spoken at the same time.

Anyway, I suggest buying The Elements of Style by William Strunk Jr. and E.B. White (also known as Strunk and White). The book is thin, but packed with a ton of information. They tell you how to make your writing clear.

I’m certainly not perfect (if you read my newsletters, I almost always have an error in them), but I refer to the little book mentioned in the previous paragraph and Grammar for Dummies when I have a questions. Love the “For Dummies” books.

Savage Champion ARCs

Is anyone interested in receiving the ARC of Savage Champion? All you need to do is read the book and do a review on Goodreads. Yep. Good or bad. Email me at Author Carla Swafford @ Gmail .com (leave out the spaces) with your USPS mailing address. My copies should arrive the end of the month and I’ll mail out to you then. You must be a subscriber, and sorry, must be in the U.S.

Blurb, Excerpt, Tropes

If you haven’t read my earlier newsletters talking about it, here’s a little info on Savage Champion and an excerpt. See if it is your type of genre.

The blurb.

When a private investigator tracks down a client’s lost sister, he discovers she’s not lost or the client’s sister. The woman is a vampire on a campaign of vengeance. Somehow he must stop her killing spree and protect her at the same time.

Tori Amherst

I died years ago.

In my savage new life, I revenge the helpless.

But a hunter came. A human. A former cop. Now a private eye.

His body, his blood, and his wounded soul are perfect.

Then I discover I’m not a champion, but a terror.

Ronan Michaels

I died in her arms.

But I woke to a new life full of hate.

She hides a truth. I hate secrets.

I crave her body, her blood, and her lost soul.

Then I discover the lies.

I will get my revenge and she will be mine.


(In The Middle of Chapter One)

Tori

Out of the corner of my eye, I noted the Mustang idling a block away. He was good. Certainly better than the others who’d tried to track me over the last few years. But if the truth were told, I really didn’t care if he followed. What was there to worry about?

I’d checked in with the Alabama master vampire over an hour ago. He’d been happy to see I’d returned home. If he hadn’t been my master—the vampire who created me—I would need his permission to stay in his domain. This would ensure they wouldn’t send an enforcer or assassin to remove me.

My only concern, momentarily, was the man following me. If he’d been a vampire, I would merely ask him to state his business. But with his being human, there was a different protocol. For now, the questions were, what did he want? And was he part of the LVH?

The Legion of Vampire Hunters drove white cars and vans, and it was unlikely they owned a sporty blue car like his. Possibly a human private detective had decided to follow me. Didn’t he  know curiosity killed the cat? Or the nosey investigator?

I grinned, flashing my deadly canines. It didn’t matter if someone saw them. In and around the club, others would only think I was part of the crowd, pretending to be a child of the night. Little did they know the real thing was among them.

Waved in by the bouncer, I threaded my way through the thick, pulsating crowd inside. The smell of sexually excited bodies filled my senses. The music thumped through my body. Couples swayed on the dance floor, many grinding pelvises together more than dancing.

As a human, I had enjoyed the night life and the pounding music. As a vampire, I absolutely loved it. So many sensations to drink in. I closed my eyes for a second and inhaled the wonderful smell of humanity. Liquor had nothing over heated bodies and hot blood. The high was better than a manmade drug, legal or illegal.

Strategic black lights lit the large room, leaving several dark corners, ideal for feeding. And I regularly exploited them. Dim lighting wasn’t a problem for me. Vampires’ night vision was excellent.

Tonight, blood didn’t drive me to the night club, but the need for human company. A frantic feeling saturated the air in the nightclub. A sensation in the air to live for the moment for tomorrow might never come. Like many, I believed in the fast-paced world—live fast, die young, and leave a good-looking corpse.

I sniggered at the ironic thought. I was a step above a corpse.

Coming to a stop at a corner booth, I stared at the young couple occupying the V-shaped bench seat. They completely ignored me. Their arms and legs entwined, clothes in disarray. I leaned over the table and lightly tugged at the man’s sleeve and then fanned five one-hundred-dollar bills in front of his face.

“What’s that for?” His eyes widened with interest.

“The booth?” With a hint of a smile, I waited for his decision.

He shrugged, snatched the cash out of my hand, and pulled the protesting girl out of the booth, heading toward the bar.

I slid in until my back was against the corner. A great place to see the majority of the room. With one leg tucked beneath me, I waited to see if my stalker had followed.

A little bit of time passed before he walked into the club. Though I’d seen him distinctly in the dark as he followed me in his Mustang, seeing him this close was a treat. So masculine and striking.

I studied him. He appeared to be six-foot, maybe six-one, late twenties. Looking at the lines around his eyes, I changed it to early thirties. His wind-tossed dark hair gave him the air of a poet or musician. Thick strands framed his lightly tanned, high-cheekboned face giving him an untamed look along with his five o’clock shadow. He had an aquiline nose above pouting lips. The type of lips that I would enjoy sucking and licking, and having the favor returned.

What would it be like to touch him, taste his blood? A shake of my head cleared my mind of that notion. Hunger for blood was always below the surface, but tonight my hunger was for what I sensed in the man.

Not since my reincarnation had a human interested or attracted me to such an extent I almost felt as if he spellbound me. But he wasn’t a warlock. Otherwise, I would sense the magic surrounding him.

While I studied him, I sensed his discomfort with the nightclub. Was he wondering how many were actually vampires? Would he be disappointed to find I was the only one in the club tonight? Did he actually know there was such a creature?

He was good. Not once had he looked my way, but still he maneuvered through the gyrating  crowd and stopped at the bar nearest to my booth. He motioned to the bartender and leaned over, probably so he could be heard. The bartender nodded and began to pull a draft.

Without glancing around, he sat on a stool and lifted his gaze, staring straight at me.

Such soulful hazel-green eyes. I sighed. Vampire vision was a blessing. Had he sensed me? Obviously, he knew where I sat. I was alone. Did he feel my interest? Was he psychically sensitive? Was that why my attraction for him was so strong?

Of course, the overwhelming question was, why was he following me? Well, I could wonder about him all night. Or with certainty, I could learn my answers the easy way. I gave him a big smile.


That’s a little taste. The book has a prologue that shows how she became a vampire. It is a gruesome beginning. And there’s another gruesome scene in the book where they chop up a zombie. I wanted to warn you in case it wasn’t to your taste.

Like my other books, it does have sex scenes throughout and a lot of curse words. It is a spicy romance with suspense and mystery tied in.

Here are the tropes: Human vs Vampire, Alpha Hero, Dark Secret, Secret identity, Redemption/Revenge, Person in distress, Protector, Second Chance, Under a Spell.

Well, have a fun time drinking green beer and getting pinched.

Thanks.

Carla

6 thoughts on “Newsletter: Author Carla Swafford – ARCS & Happy Irish Day

  1. Thanks, Debra! I’ll put you on the list for an ARC of Savage Champion. Jake is the first book of the Southern Crime Family. There will be two after it (Sen & Ethan). I’ll tell Betty she’s the hot one. LOL! Grown millennial kids are a hoot! Thanks again. 

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  2. Hi Carla! I had you (and that hot one, Betty) on my mind yesterday. I was dusting my  China-cabinet-turned-into-something-worthwhile bookcase and pulled Jake out for my next read. I hope I’m not going to be hurting for not having read book 1. I guess I’ll figure that out in a chapter or two. Then I’ll just have to whip out my Kindle and buy book 1 if that’s what it takes! I can work with that! Betty’s paranormal series I loved so much I plan to reread this summer. I have my own idea of “beach reads.”  I loved that you included some writing tips in your newsletter. Us groovy girls are always on the look out for  anything “for dummies!” I love those books. I thought they were written for me! You had me at “THIN!” I’d love to read for you. I’m coming back to life. I’ve decided that I’ve done all the soul searching I can do. I still can’t find the damn thing! So, I’ll just come back and try something different. Maybe watch reruns of Soul Train is what my millennial son suggested. KIDS! Do you have any? You probably don’t need my address, but if you do… 3204 US RT 9wApt 1BNew Windsor, NY 12553 But, ya know, I’m good with a book funnel copy or a pdf. I’m not fancy. I just live in NY. I’m really a Kansas girl at heart. Not a drop of Irish. I’m about as Danish as they get. My great grandmother was Magdalena Hans Christian. There’s some Swedes in there knocking each other around.  So, blood, vampires, a little rough back alley fun. I know all of those words. I’ve used some of them myself.  Bring it!!  I’ll be happy to read for you. Just let me know your timeline. And where all you want it promoted. I am there! Deb Hartman PS If there isn’t dialogue to move the action, then I probably will lose interest. But, crappy dialogue won’t cut it either! You rock~!

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      1. Carla, I have posted my review of Jake on Amazon twice. It keeps telling me to do it again and “not show that I know the author” I have never met you!! If you see a review under Steve Hartman, that is my husband. He says he will try doing it under his name. I didn’t know they weren’t going through. I ignored the last few Amazon emails. They’ve been about my business account, which I canceled.  I apologize. I also haven’t seen any of your comments on WordPress. And I have an account. Something is up in the land of Artificial Intelligence.  I hope you are well. Deb Hartman And Betty is just as short as me, so we have to be nice to each other! Are you our tall pal? lol

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        1. I believe we met at Betty’s last launch party. Not sure how tall Betty is, but she’s probably taller or the same height. I’m 5’4″. Thanks for your review. Amazon has always been a pain to deal with. 🙂

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          1. Oh my gosh, woman! It’s amazing what new glasses will do. I was squinting at your face thinking I don’t remember her. THEN new lenses. Shoot, I know who you are. Slap me down and call me stupid. Now let me tell you what you did to me you stinker. I get a USPS notification. We have porch pirates, so I need to know what’s coming. Well, this package says blood pressure cuff. Who the heck and why? I already have one. The package was delivered. I didn’t look at it. I threw it on the corner with the junk mail. Out of sight, out of mind. Ya know?  Carla Swafford! I had no idea you sent me the Savage Champion. Love you, girl. I’ll start it this weekend. I’m sure I missed your launch date, but I’ll write something spicy in my review. Thanks for the sticker. The bookmakers are a big hit with the ladies at the dental office. They want to know if your models are available. Hmm? Thanks a bunch, you sweet munchkin!

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